Inanity broke my brain...

So there's this Trigun fic on FFN that's cute and fluffy. Not the best stuff I've ever read, but hey, coming from the pit of voles (™ Arafel), ain't bad. Then she writes this chapter with two such unbelievable original characters that it throws off the cute fluffiness, and I call her on it. She responds, in her author's notes for a chapter, that I should introduce her to the men I know that act their age

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